Puridhal
Chapter 10
Pic Courtesy: @kathirmullai_captures
*********KM
room – Present time************
Kathir sat
thinking how to go about the last leg of his surprise plans as well as where to
start and how to go about clearing the misunderstandings and miscommunications
they have had so far. He knows it’s a long list and it cannot be sorted in a
single talk or over the night. But, he wants to get started at some point, and
today seems like a good day to set things in motion.
If they
wish to start living their life as husband and wife, in all sense of the word, it’s
very important to clear the air before moving on further. He needs to know and
understand her, for their life to be happy. She needs to know and understand him,
for their life to be peaceful. Postponing or rushing through it all is not going
to help in the long run, and this is a lifetime commitment. Till death do them
apart.
He may be
the man in love, but he is also a very sensible and practical man. Life had
never been a bed of roses for him and he is not expecting it to be one big celebration
all the time. But in order to make it a pleasant one, they both got to work.
There are
things he got to know about her, things she got to know about him. A few lines
from a page in a dairy can only say so much. They got to understand each
other’s wishes, dreams, fears, likes and
dislikes, aversions, et al
He had all
these thoughts from time to time as he started taking notice of his wife, but
never knows how to go about it. He is not very comfortable in expressing his
thoughts and feelings. But right now, he got to do it. The earlier talk at the
shop with Jeeva also proved his thoughts right. There are certain places where
you expressed yourself clearly and openly. This is one.
**********J
& K Conversation – PS Shop ************
As Kathir
cut the call from Mullai, Jeeva who was nearby smiled at him and signed for him
that they need to talk, since he was occupied in some other work. Getting the
cue, Kathir sent Saravana to deliver the order instead of going by himself.
Kathir
waited a few beats for Jeeva to finish his works when Maama interrupted
Ma:
Kathiru! Enna inniki aal konjam palapalapa iruka?
K:
Arambichiteengala Maama! Naan apadiye dhan iruken.
Ma: Partha
appadi theriyalayae?! Eanda Jeeva nee sollu!
J: Avana
konja neram vambu izhukama dhan irungalen maama…
K: Vambu
izhukararu!(He said this sarcastically, in a murmur)
Customer Varanga.. Poi parunga..
Ma: Porom
da saami.. Porom.. Annan – thambi rendu perum seriyadhaan da irukeengha…
Maama
leaves the place after this fun banter letting J&K to have an uninterrupted
conversation.
J: Kathiru!
Enna yosanaiya irukaravan?
K: Adhulam
onnum ila nae!
J: Seri…
Rathri ethna maniku veetuku vandha? Kalailayum aala kannalayae?
K: Adhu…
Adhu…
He drags
his hands through his hair, stares at a distance with his trademark smile and
smooth outs his beard with his right hand
K: Night
oru 1.30 – 2 irukum nae … Kalaila 5 manikulam kilambiten!
J: 5
manika? Apo nee thoongave ilaya?
K: Adhulam
thoonginen… nalla thoonginen nae…
He smiled
broadly looking at Jeeva, hinting that he is actually relaxed and happy.
J: Apo
andha pulla kita pesita! Appadi thaana? Adhaan mugathula bulb eriyudha?
Ipo un
kuzhapam lam theendhudha? Yaar edhai thappa purinjukiteenga?
K: mmmm…
Pesinendhaan… Aaana pesala!
J:
Puriyalada Kathiru!
K: Inniki
avaluku Pirandhanaal. Adhaan nerla poi Vazhthu matum sonnen. Aparam kalaila
kovilku poitu vandhom…
Jeeva acted
surprised on hearing its Mullai’s birthday, not revealing that he is aware of
the information. He knows his brother, a small indication, he will connect the
dots and understand things. He is brilliant that way. But somehow he has missed
something major to let his wife go and for him to suffer this much.
J: Avanga
veetuku poi vazhthu sonniya? Apo athai, maama lam irundhangala?
K: Adhu…
Avangalukkelam theriyama.. Mottai maadila parthen… 😊 Kalailayum… Yaarukum theriyama neerama koviluku poitu vandhutom..
J: Appadi
podu. Super da… Apo nee innum enna
prechanai nu andha pullai kita pesave ilaya?
K: Ila
nae.. Naan rendu dhadava muyarchi panninen… Aana ava vidala.. seri.. pirandhanaalum
adhuvumaa edhuku ava sandhoshatha
keduthukitunu… Naanum thirumbavum muyarchi pannala..
J: Hmmm…
seridhan… adhukagha pesamayae vitudadha da… Idhu innoru murai prechanai ya
vandhu, thirumbhavum idhey madhri aaga koodadhu.. Naan solli dhan nee
purinjipenu ila… Parthuko Kathiru!
Aaama! Ipo
andha pulla avanga veetlaya iruku? Namba veetuku kootitu vandhu iruka
vendiyadhu dhana?
K: Ila nae…
Ava varen nu dhan sonna! Naan dhan anna-anni kita oru varthai ketuttu, kootitu
varlam nu… adhu matum ila.. Inniki ava pirandhanaal vera.. Ava veetlayum ivala
pakkanum nu aasai paduvanga la.. Adhan..
J: Dei…
Ippadi ellaraiyum pathi yosikarayae.. Unna pathiyum yosi da.. Kalyanam mudinju
varra mudhal pirandhanaal.. Idhulam indha ponnungha romba ethir parpaangha..
Nee poi Mullai kooda iru.. Engayavudhu poitu vaangha..
Meena
birthday va naan marandhadhuku evlo galatta pannanu neeyum parthey la..
Samalikka ennaku 10 naal aachu!
Jeeva
recounted the experience with his trade mark “mudiyala” expression and smiled.
Kathir too smiled broadly on seeing Jeeva and the way he recollected the
fiasco. This led to him remembering Mullai’s tears. But he immediately pushed
it aside as he doesn’t want Jeeva to notice and question.
K: Ila
nae.. Adhulam oru prechanaiyum ila.. Annan vera ila… Apparama eadhavudhu senjikalam..
J: Dei..
Naan Kadaiya parthukaren da.. Nee po. Aama! Andha pullaiku eadhavudhu gift
vaangi kuduthiya ? Paavam.. Un pirandhanaalku eadhavudhu pannanum nu andha
pulla evlo kashta patudhu?!
Jeeva spoke
these with a kind of admiration for Mullai and love for Kathir. Jeeva was
totally astonished when he learnt the reason for Mullai’s actions. Once again
he thanked god that time, for getting her married to Kathir and not him. He was
sure that he couldn’t have given her the kind of love she deserve.
Every
single things Kathir and Mullai did for each other made Jeeva feel happy and
proud. His fears of spoiling the life of two innocent souls were put to rest at
those times.
Kathir on
the other hand, slowly touched the ring on his finger, remembering once again
the hardships she went through, her joy at his insistence of getting a ring and
how happy she was when he expressed his appreciation and gratitude for her
present.
It made him
smile at the same time, a few drops of tears touched his eyes.
Kathir
assured Jeeva that he did indeed got Mullai a gift through his head shake as he
found it difficult to voice his answer. After a few beats,
K: Annan
kita sollitu kootitu varalam nu irundhen… Avaru veliyur poradhu pathi ennaku
theriyaadhu!
J: Kalaila
dhaan da edho call vandhudhu.. Apparam dhan kilambi ponnaru. Seri… Nee poi
kootitu vaa.. Annan enna vennam na solla porar?
After a few
beat, Jeeva continued,
Oh! Sir
inniki adhaan menu lam ennanu ketengaloo? Pondatti porandhanaaliku avaluku
pidicha menu.. (Jeeva smiles broadly making Kathir feel shy ) Yaaruku eppadiyo,
ennaku nee idhulam pannaradhu parkum podhu romba perumaiyavum sandhosamavum
iruku da Kathiru!
Jeeva became
little emotional on saying this word… Kathir noticed this immediately and started
to pacify him. Kathir has an idea as to why Jeeva is being emotional, but he
got to be sure of it and also he does need some guidance from his closest
friend in the family, more like his twin.
K:
Ennanna?! Edhuku ipo nee edhuedho yosikara?
J: Adhulam
onnum ila da.. Seri.. Nee kilambu da.. Poi andha pullaiya namma veetuku kootitu
varra vazhiya paaru… Inniki sevaikizhamai dhana.. Eppadiyum perusa vyabaram
irukaadhu.. Delivery yum ellam ready ah dhana iruku!
K: Ila nae…
Naan oru 11.30 mela dhaan varen nu soli iruken. Ipo dhana 10 aagudhu! Innum
neram iruku.. Nee edhuku ipo pechaai mathura? Thevailadha edhayo manasula
summakariya?
Jeeva
understood Kathir’s insistence and decided to share his fears and guilt.
J: Thevai
illadhadhu nu solla mudiyadhu da… Naan senja thappu, namma kudumbathuku evlo
periya avamanatha thedi thara irundhudhu! Neeyo, Mullaiyo anniki oru vaarthai
mudiyadhu nu solli irundha, ellame thalaikizha poi irukum la?
Unga
vazhkai pathi oru nimisham kooda yosikama , neenga nesikaravangalukagha evlo
periya vishiyam panni irukeengha rendu perum? Avangha appa, ammavukagha
Mullaiyum, namma kudumbathukagha neeyum…
Ayusukum
Naanum, Meenavum ungaluku kadamai pattu irukom da Kathiru!
K: Annae!
Edhuku nee ipo ippadi periya periya varthai lam pesura? Appadi inga enna
nadanthuchu? Nee ippadi ellam pesadha nae… indha yosanailam innum unnaku iruka?
Ean nae?
J: Kathiru!
Unnakum andha pullaikum eppavum aagadhu da. Adhuvum, Athaiyum maamavum senja
thappu nee thulli kooda marakala num ennaku theriyum. Inniki, nee ivlo thooram Mullaiyoda
pazhaghi, purinju vazhuradhu paarkum podhu, nee evlo vitukuduthuirupaenu ennaku
puriyudhu..
Unna naan
endha madhri oru nilamaiku thallivituten.. Naan venum nu seiyala da Kathiru!
Mullaikum unnakum oru manathaangal nadanthu andha pullai avanga amma veetuku
poi irukunu ketapave ennaku romba kashtam aagiduchu da… Adhukkaparam nee patta
paadu… en paathi usuru poieduchuda kathiru!
Oruvelai…
edhaavudhu thappa poi irundha… Ennala nimmathiya vaazhave mudiyadhu da… En kuttra
unarchiye enna saagadichirukum…
K: Anna…
Ennana! Nee mudhal la amaidhiyaagu… Ippadiyelam yen yosikara?
Kathir went
and put his hands on Jeeva’s shoulder, pacifying him.
J: Ila da
Kathiru! Ennaika irundhalum idhai ellam naan unkita solli than aaganum… Neeyum
Mullaiyum konjam purinju vazha aarambhicha pinnadi dhaan en kurta unnarchi
konjam kuranjithu! Aana.. adhu muzhusa eppvum pogumanu ennaku theriyala!
Namma
kudumbathukagha nee evlo vitu kuduthu irukanu ennaku theriyum da… Adha vida,
ennakagha nee evlo vishiyathula vitukuduthu irukanum ennaku theriyum… Naan un
annan da. Naan dhaan adhuyellam seiyanum.. Aana nee dhana eppavum senjuiruka!
K: Annae…
Vendam nae… Nee edho thevai iladhadha yosikara! Namma adhai ellam thaandi
vandutom.. Ipo nalla irukom.. innimel innum nalla irupom..
J: Kathiru!
Naan solla vendiyadha sollidaren da.. Konjam nidhanama kelu…
Chinna
vayasula irundhu nee matum dhanada ennaku vitukuduthavan… Naan oru dhadava
kooda unnakagha edhuvum vitukudukalaiye… Nee enga vita? Yosika kooda vidamata! Nee
dhaan yaarum solradhuku munnadi mundhikitu vandhu senjite irukiye da..
8th
std la tour poona podhum seri… un padipa? Ila en diplamova nu vandha appavum
seri! Ean bike kooda ennaku pudichadhu dhana da vangina! Unnaku andha vandi
mela avlo piriyam ilanu ennaku theriyume…
Adhulam
vidu… Meenava naan love panra vishiyam yaarukum theriyaadhu.. Unkita kooda naan
maraichuten… Mudhalaye unkita solli irundha ivlo kuzhapam vandhu irukaadhu!
Mullaiya
naan love panren nu neeyum nambi, apo en kita oru vaarthai sonnayeda.. Unnaku
pidichirukuna, naan eathukaren anna nu! Anni nu koopidaren nu! Naan marakala da Kathiru!
Meena
unkita evlo kovapatu iruka.. Mullaikita eppadiyellam pesi sandai potuirukanu
ennakum theriyum da… Neenga rendu perum adhaiellam oru prechanai aakama,
avalukagha evlo vitu kudutheengha?
Naan kadhalicha
ponnaiye kalyanam pannikara vaipu ennaku amaijadhu neenga rendu perum vitukuduthadhala
matum dhaan da… Adhuku neenga rendu perum romba periya vilai kuduthurukeenga…
Kalyana
earpadu pannappave, naan konjam dheergama irundhu, Mullai kitayum, namma
veetlayum pesi irundha evlo prechanaigal ilama irundhirukum?
Mullai
yayium kaya paduthi… thevai ilama aasai valathukka vachu… Ennoda thayakathunala un vazhkaiyaikum orey
nimishathula thirupi potuten da naanu…
Neenga
rendu perum konjam pesi, pazhagha aarambhicheengha nu therinja apparam dhan
ennaku konjam nimathi aachu.. Aaana, enniki rendu perum oruthara oruthar yeathukitu,
sandhoshama vazha aarambikareengalo, anniki than da naan muzhusa sandhosha
paduven. Adhu dhaan neenga enna manichadhuku aana adaiyalam!
K: Ipo
edhuku nee manipu, adhu idhu nu pesitu iruka? Annae! Idha naan pala thadava un
kita solli iruken.. Ipavum solren.. Idhula nee endha thappum seiyala.. Yaarum
endha thappum seiyala…
Ennika
irundhaalum annan – anni parthu ennaku oru kalyanam panni vachu irupanga.. Adhu
ipo Mullai ya iruka!
Idhu naal
varaikum ava kooda irundhadhula solren, naan idha pathi ava kita pesinadhu ila…
Pesavum avasiyam ila.. Naana pesavum maten… Avala edhavadhu pesanumnu nenaichu
sonna, ketupen. Pesalainalum, onnum illai.
Aana ennaku therinju avalukum unmelayum seri,
anni melayum seri kovamo, varuthamo edhuvum ila… Ava aarambathula oru dhadava
sonna.. Anga adhu mudinjidhu.
Engalukula prechanai
ilanu lam naan sollala.. Indha nodi…engalukula sila thavarana puridhal iruku…
adhai naan seri seiven nae…
Naan
vitukoduthen nu lam ennaku thonnala.. Aana ennaku pidikadha endha
vishiyathaiyum naan pannala..
Mullai kaga
naan edhuvum pesa mudiyadhu… aana naan virupapatu dhaan purinjukka muyarchi
panren…
Neeya
yaaraiyum venumne kaaya paduthalaye? Sandharpa soozhnilai appadi nadakka
vachudhu… Idha ellam nee unnakula thookitu thiriyuriya? Mudhal la ellathaiyum
eduthu dhoora podu!
Enga
sandhosham unnaku mukiyam na, un sandhosham engaluku, mullaiyaiyum serthu dhan
solren, romba mukiyam nae…
Idha avale
sonnadhaan nee nambuvena… avale unkita solluva.. Idhudhan unmai.
Apparam
anni unmela evlo anbum, pasamum irundha, avanga veede venamnu vandhu irupaangha…
Avlo vasadhi vaaipughala orey nimishathula thooki potutu vandhurukaangha! Ellam
unnakagha! Unna usura nenaikaravangha mela eppadi kovapada mudiyum?
Andha
maadhri anbu kudukara oruthar kita rendu varthai kekarudhu lam onnume ila..
Avangalum namma kudumbathu mela evlo pasama irukangha.. Adhayum namma dhan
pakkarome…
Ivangalum
anni dhana! Andha urimaila pesurangha.. ennaku endha prechanaiyum ila.. idhulaam
vitu kudukaradha?
Mullaiyum
avangalum nammala madhri nalla pazhagarangha nu matum ennaku theriyum. Innum
solla ponna namala vidave nalla pazhuguranga… (He had a smile at this point
which showed how proud he felt at their understanding)
Nee inimel
ippadi ellam yosika maten nu ennaku sollu. Ippadiyellam nee nenaikaradhu,
ennaku romba kashtama iruku..
J: Un
manasu yaarukum varadhu da Kathiru! Ellathulayum nee oru nalla vishiyatha
matume pakkara! Unnakunu oru aasai , kanavu ellam irundhirukume da? Ennala ipo
adhulam poche da!
K: Anna!
Ipo naan solren. Theliva ketuko. Naan en vazhkai pathi eppavum yosichadhu ila.
Adhaidhan neengha ellam eppavum pannarengale.. ipo adhuku innum rendu per vera
serthuvitu irukeengha.. Avughalayum, Mullaiyaium dhaan solren.. nalla
parthukareengalae…
Mullai ya
naan kalyanam pannadhu eppadi venum nalum nadandhu irukalam. Adhai naan
yosikala.. inimel yosikavum poradhilla…
Ipo, Ennaku
avala pidikuma nu ketena – romba pidikum. Namaku pidichavangala anandha paduthi
parkaradha vida vera enna periya sandhosam iruka mudiyum? Adhuku enna panna
mudiyum nu matum dhaan en yosanai ellam… Ennaku pidicha unga ellaraiyum sandhosa
padutha naan ellam seiven..
Unnaku naan
Mullai yoda vazhuradhu dhana sandhosam! Unakagavum dhan.. aana ennoda
muzhumanasoda, ishtapatu ava kuda nan vazhven. Nee ini oru nimisham kooda
ippadi yosikadha. Avlo dhan. Puriyudha?
Jeeva
smiles faintly wiping tears from his eyes on hearing Kathir’s words. He felt
light after sharing his guilt with Kathir and the assurance from Kathir helped
Jeeva a lot. He now wanted to know what brought the changes overnight in his brother.
Yesterday this time, his brother was sulking.
J: Romba
sandhosam da Kathiru! Rendu perum eadhavudhu pesinengala? Enna prechanai nu ipo
purinjudha?
K: Ila na…
Innum adha pathilaam pesala… Pesanamnu dhaan ponnen… neram aagiduchu… Adhu
matum ilama… Ava pirandhanaal adhuvuma, edhavudhu solli avala sangada paduthi,
naanum sangadapattu… andha yosanailaye vituten…
J:
Adhukagha appadiye vituduviya? Purinja dhaana da theervu theriyum… ennaku
ennamo onnum iladha vishiyam nu dhaan thoonudhu…
K: Purinja dhaan
nae theervu… Adhukunu oru neram, idam ellam iruke? Adhaan.. ivlo naal
kathuirundhean..
J: Adhuvum
seri dhaan… Aana adhukagha romba naal onnum sollama, peasama irundhudadhada.. Manasula irukaradha konjam velipadaiya pesu!
Thayaka padadha kathiru… Andha pullaiku un paasam puriyanum..
K: Adhu
dhaan nae inngha prechanaiye! Pesanuma/ pesama puriyanuma… Solli dhan puriyum
na, adhu seriya? Idhulaam sollama, namma seiyaradhula ean puriya matengudhu?
J: Kathiru!
Naan onne onu solren… Yaar vena, enna vena solatum… Nee un manasula irukaradha,
neraidiya Mullaikita pesu. Un virupatha sollu. Un santhegangalla kettu thelivu
panniko. Idhuku munnadi unga vaazhkaila enna vena nadanthu irukalam… aana neeye
sonnadhu dhan…
Neenga
rendu perum dhan sernthu vaazhanum. Adhuku neenga rendu perum dhaan pesanum.
Pesama puriyum ne irundhaalum, vaarthaila adhai solli paaren… Adhu vera sandhosham
da. Adhu unga rendu perukum kidaikum…
Mullai un
pondatti da. Neengha rendu perum dhan ini vazhkai muzhukka payanikkanum. Unga
rendu per kula sollika mudiyaadhu na, vera yaar kita sollika mudiyum?
K: Ennaku
ippadiyelam pesi pazhakam ila na… Enga eadhavudhu thappa senjudiveno, adhunala
avaluku kashtam aagidumonu oru bayam. Thayakkam.
Ennala
avaluku oru sangadamo, kashtamo iruka kudaathu ila nae…
Vaarthaikal
earpaduthura vaali romba peruse… andha kaayam sila samayam aarave aaradhu.
Manaivi nu
urimai edhuthu, avaluku pidikaadha edhaiyaavudhu varthaigalala solli,
kayapadhita.. (He shook his head with a sad expression keeping his hand on his
chest)…
J: Naan
nethu sonnadhu dhaan … ippavum solren… Nee edhayo thappa purinjutu iruka! Poi
Pesu. Seekirama pesu. Edhuvum thappu aagadhu…
Naan paratha
varaikum, Mullaiku unnai pidichiruku… Neeya sollanamnu andha pulla wait
pannudho ennavo? Idhulam ponnuga solradha vida, pasanga sollanamnu ethir
paarpanga…
K: Apo,
pesuradhu dhaan seri nu ne ninaikuriya annae?
J: Kandippa
Kathiru! Eppavume pesunuma nu ennaku theriyaadhu… Aana ipo nee pesu.
K: Seri
nae.. Seekiram pesuren.
J:
Sandhosham da… Seri.. Ipo kilambu… Avanga veetuku poi andha pullaiya kootitu
vaa..
K: Kootitu
vandhudaren nae… ean thoorathura?
J: Ilaya
pinna? Avala parthu, veetuku ava varennu sonna apparam dhana sir mugathula praghasame
vandhu iruku. Rendu naala unna parka mudiyala.
Both the
brothers looked at each other and laughed, one shyly while the other in genuine
happiness.
To be
Continued…
Wow....that was really a very beautiful long post. Loved reading it. I always adore jeeva kathir relationship and the way they stand for each other. Yes it's always been kathir who sacrifices anything for jeeva. It's so nice to see jeeva pouting his heart out to kathir. Would love to see such a scene in the serial also. The dialogues were all so natural and completely like in the serial. Good one. Expecting more and more romance between KM
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DeleteBeautiful & very emotional convo. Brothers bonding wow. Jeeva manasula ulla kavalayellam kathir anna kitta sollitanga ippothan he felt relax. Mullai & kathir avanga veetukahathan sacrifice pannunga bt nw 2 perum evlo lv panranga. Beautifully written Kathir annavoda hesitation avarda chrctr. Jeeva oru annanyum thandi oru nalla frnd athu avangada rltnshplye theriyuthu & kathir anna silathalam pasanga sollanumnu pannuga ethirparpomla. Jeeva sollura mathiri sollithan parungale athu oru vithamana hpy😊 wife a irunthalum namma solra varthai avangala kayapaduthira koodathu antha vali eppavum manasula aarathu. Ithuthanga kathir genuine man👍
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DeleteAppa.. Quite long post.. Somehow, both d bros had a good convo.. The way, Jeeva, adviced kathir and how much d bonding between these two... Such a lovely one.. So.. This is how mulla came from her mom's house.. 👌👌👌
ReplyDeleteShe is coming soon. :)
DeleteFirst of all hats off to you for the longest part ever u did for this chapter.. I love how Kathir being a sensible man to clear out the MU first other than starting off their relationship just like that.
ReplyDeleteThe bond between jeeva Kathir is soo realistic. From a fun convo to the emotional one and end with advices are too perfect. I love how u bringing in each character with a good content . They all playing a good role for our km.
Thank you. I try my level best to keep the characters as close to their nature as possible.
DeleteJeeva kathir convo s one of my fav in PS... D best dialogue s wen jeeva telling abt kathirs sacrifiec... Sooper u nailed it...
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