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Oodal - A Fanfiction - 15


Oodal
Chapter 15





Pic Courtesy:  @kathirmullai_captures

Mullai who had left her mobile on her bed in the room and went to the washroom returned. There was a missed call notification light on her mobile. But who would be calling her at this time of the night? She is tired of waiting for his call. She did not check the phone and decided to move near the window to look outside when her phone rang once again.

She turned to look at the caller and her heart stopped beating for a second
Has the earth stopped rotating? She found it really hard to breath!

The caller Name displayed as “MY SUN “ with a heartbeat emoji at the start and end.

M: h..h… hello!!

Kathir was so happy and relieved in hearing her voice that he forgot to speak for a few seconds.

K: Ey….

M: mmm… sollunga!

K: nee.. nee Saptiya?

M: mmmm… Neenga?!

K: Thoongitiya?

M: Ilenga… Thookam varla.. Neenga thoongala? Neram aagudhey!

K: Illa… Thookam…. Thoonga….

M: Ennanga?

K: Pesalama? Ippo?

M: mmm… Solunga…

K: Enga iruka?

M: Veetla dhanga. Room la….

K: mmmm

M: mmmm…

K: Kovama en mela? Mmm?

M: ilenga…

K: Unmaiya sollu…

M: Nejamave kovam ilenga!

Kathir has slowly walked towards her house is actually standing near the big plant in front of the compound. He saw inside and there she was, near the window of a room, glowing in the faint light coming from the room.

Her silhouette was so beautiful and he was mesmerized. Looking at her, once again proved how much he missed her.

K: Veliya… Veliya vara mudiyuma?

M: Aahn?

Mullai was shocked with that question of kathir’s. Did he just called her out? Is he nearby? Has he come in search of her in the middle of the night? In this rain?

M: Enna ketenga?

K: Ippo unnala veliya vara mudiyumaanu ….

M: Neenga ipo enga irukeenga?

K: Inga… Veliya …

M: Veliyava?

She frantically moves from the window…

K: Ey… Ey… Padharadha! Iru… Naan solradha kelu!

M: Enga irukeenga neenga ipo?

K: Mudhal la andha Jannal kita vandhu utkaaru.

She comes and sits by the window and swipes the screen off to look outside. …. And finds him standing there outside the compound, near the plant nearby.. but she can see his face from the faint moonlight… He looked so handsome.

He was here to see her! She couldn’t believe her eyes. He actually came  and is standing there in the rain for her. God!

M: eh.. eh.. eh…

K: Ipo sollu… Veliya vara mudiyuma?

M: Veliya na.. engeenga?

She was looking at him through the window and he was looking at her from the compound wall..
He made gestures with his hands as he spoke, knowing that she is watching

K: Inga.. veetuku munnadi….

M: Naan amma va eluparen.. Neenga ula vaanga..
K: Ey.. Ey.. Ey… iru.. Ennnaku unkita thaniya pesanum… Yaaraiyum thondharavu panama vara mudiyuma unnala?

He looked at the time, Its already 11.43

M: Irunga Varen…

She ran as fast as she could without making noises, and opened the back door, since opening the front door will wake her parents.. She ran around the house, slipping on the wet floors twice in order to reach him.. He saw all this..

She was breathing hard as she came to a halt near the gates. She simply stood there and looked at him.. Observed him… She felt elated that she wanted to cry…

He moved closer to the gate..

She slowly, without making any noise opened the gate and let him in.

He looked at her and said,
Mela… ma.. maadiku poi pesulama?

She couldn’t trust her eyes or ears or voice. She affirmed her yes with a head shake.

K: Seri.. Vaa.. Medhuva.. Vizhunthudadha..

She blushed. So he noticed her hurry.

Kathir put his right hand on his chest.. to calm his erratic heartbeat. She is here. In flesh.

They claimed the steps in silence and went to the terrace.

Kathir leaned on the nearby wall and gestured her to come and stand near him.

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