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Oodal - A Fanfiction - 13


Oodal
Chapter 13






Pic Courtesy:  @kathirmullai_captures

As he was riding to the shop, hhe thought of how to contact her and get to know the truth. Now that he feels there is something missing, he cant wait patiently. But he has work to do. Also she is not at home. She is at her mom’s place.

Kathir made a small detour before going to the shop, for one part of his plan. By the time he returned to the shop it was around 9.20. Moothy has already left. Jeeva and Saravana were waiting for him.

K: Sorry nae.. Romba nerama wait pannariya?

J: Ila da.. Engalukum ipo dhan velai Mudinjudhu. Bill la irundhu ellam petti kulaye iruku da.

K: Seri nae.. Naan Parthukiren.

Jeeva looked at him for a few seconds and said, Naan pinnadi kadhava lock panama vaikiren. Seriya! Aana naan sonnadha konjam nyabagam irukatum.

Kathir shook his head in an affirmative as to accept his offer. As Jeeva left to go home,

K: Vaada Saravana! Vaazhila dhana un room. Naan unna vitutu poren.

S: Naanum vandhu saraku kuduthutu room ku poikaren nae. Neenga oruthara eppadi ivalaviyum kondu povinga?

K: Seri.. Vaa!

Kathir set his vehicle and Saravanan loaded the vehicle in such a way it was comfortable to carry more goods and travel at the same time.

Once it was done, both locked the shop and started for the delivery.

As they were going, there was a small, constant rattling noise in the vehicle. Saravanan noticed it and enquired about it.

Kathir simply brushed the question off, but he knows which sound he is talking about. He infact has let it be there as a reminder of one of the memorable moments of their life.

The noise is caused by a loose part in the vehicle, which was caused by the fall. When she learnt to ride, she fell so many times, now that he thinks about it, it was bittersweet.

They arrived at the hotel and unloaded all the items. Once all the goods were unloaded, Saravanan lef to his room.

Kathir waited at the hotel for them to check the stocks and bill.

He remembered the way she learnt to ride the bike, and the proud way she flaunted her newly acquired skill to the whole of family.

When Moorthy anna asked him to select a vehicle for the women to use, he had only one thing in mind. It should be Blue in color. The delivery was delayed by three days because he has demanded for that color.

She fell so many times during those three days of learning, twice even going as far as to drag him down with her fall as well. Somehow, he managed.

He remembered her asking him to teach her…

Hotel Owner called out to Kathir

Ellam seriya iruku Kathiru! Romba Thanks. Ivlo Nerukadila enngaluku kondu vandhu kudutheengale…

K: Enga thozhil nae adhu. Idhuku enna thanks lam.

H.O: Sapteengala thambi?

K: Ila nae.. Inni.. Poi dhan sapidanum.

H.O: Inni poi ah? Enna Kathiru! Mazhai vera Peiyudhu! Idhuku melaya? Irunga. Neenga namba Hotel laye sapidunga.

He refuses to listen and offers food for Kathir.

Kathir, unable to do anything, sits and eats a little, all the while thinking of what to do next, now that he wants to get in touch with her.

By the time he is done eating, the rain has stopped, so he collects the payment for the stock and leaves once again to the godown. Going home will not be helpful. Its already 11 PM.

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