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Oodal - A Fanfiction - 8


Oodal

Chapter 8




Pic Courtesy:  @kathirmullai_captures

Kathir was taking stock of the goods in the godown, when he got a call. He has kept his mobile on the spare table there, so he ran to it in hopes that it did be a call from her.

No such luck. It was Jeeva. He picked the call.
Sollu nae…

J: Dei Kathiru! Innum godown la dhan irukiya ? ila kilambitiya?

K: Inga dhan nae iruken.

J: Apo seri da. Nee onnu pannu. Innum konja nerathula Aasari varuvaru. Godown la chinna velai solli iruken. Adha mudichidu. Inniki night aavaruku time irukam! Adhanala appadiyae pudhu kadaiku poi velai seiya aarambika sollidu.

K: Seri nae. Ethana maniku varuvaru?

J: Sayangalam oru 6.45/7.00 maniku da… En da?

K: Onnum ila nae. Chumma dhan keten.

J: Nee paarthukitae iru da.. Naan vandhudaren.

K: Ila.. Vendam nae. Naane parthukaren. Nee Veetuku po. Anni unna theduvaga! Pudhu Velai.. edhavudhu solanum nu nenaipaga.

J:Engalukalam nalla sollu da. Aana Unnakuna matum onnum yosichiradha!

K: Inga Yosika onnum illa na.. adhan pudikala nu aagiduchu….

J: Yaara ivan… thirumbhavum mudhal la irundhu aarambikadha… seriya? Anna solren.. indha oru dhadava unnakaga matum yosi. Suyanalama irundhalum paravailla… aana yosichu sei.

K: Paakalam nae.

J: Dei…

K: nae

J: Nee onnum sapada kuda ilale?

K: Pasikala nae.. Pasichcha sapitukiren. Nee Kavalai padadha. Velai ellam mudichu night late aagum. Naan vena kumaresan maama kuda irundhukiren.

J: Dei.. Adhulam onnum vendam. Nee vandhu ennaku call pannu.

K: Vendam nae.

J: Dei Kathiru! Seri… naan pinnadi kadhava pootala. Veetuku vandhudu. Neram aana parava ila.

K: Sei nae…

Once the call got cut, Kathir went on to see to his work. Jeeva on the other end had a mischivious smile on his face. The Carpenter is gonna work only for the godown today… He has no plans of working the night.

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