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Oodal - A Fanfiction - 5


Chapter 5


 


  Pic Courtesy:  @kathirmullai_captures

 


D: Sollu da.. Enna Panna?

Kanna got a little scared on seeing the worried faces of his mother and annis.

K: Aiyaiyo! Ennala annanukum, annikum edhavudhu prechanai vandhudumoo?

He slowly explained what he spoke to Mullai over the phone. Dhanam got more anxious all hearing all this while Lakshmi amma displined Kanna

L: Edhulala lam vilaiyata irukaradhu nu oru varaimurai vendama da unnaku? Dhanam.. Enna ivan ippadi panni irukan? Murugan ah koopitu naan pesatuma? Ila.. Mullai ku phone panni kudu.. Naan pesuren.

 Meena pacified them…
M: Irunga.. irunga.. Padharadeenga. Onnum thappa irukaadhu. Mullaiyo, Kathiro avlo seekiram mudivu eduka maatanga. Namba mudhal la muzhusha edhaiyum therinjukama pesa vendam.
Neenga pesinadhuku apparam dhana naan Mullai kita pesinen. Avanga Kathira miss panranga.. Konjam avangaluku space kudupom ga… Rendu perum dhan idha solve pannanum. Ilena idhu marupadiyum nadakaadhu nu enna nichiyam?

D: Meena solrudhum correct dhan. Aana rendu perum ippadi vera veetla irundhutu eppadi pesuvanga? Phone la kooda perusa pesura type ilaye indha Kathiru..
Neethu night kooda naanum maamavum ketom meena avana… Phone panniya nu? Ila.. ean pannanum? Avanga veetuku dhana poi iruka nu badhil solran.

D: Indha Mullai adhukum mela iruka… Paarunga athai! Ivan lam oru aalunu ivana koopitu pesura… (She points at kanna while saying this, and puts her hand on her forehead) Aiyo…

K: Anni… Enna ippadilam insult pannadheenga… ipo naane koopitu mullai anniyae annan kita pesa soluren.

M: Dei.. Kududa andha phone ah! ( She plucks the phone from his hand and keeps it with her) Mullai veetuku thirumba varra varaikum unnaku phone kidaiyadhu.. Hmmm

Kanna is shocked and stares at Meena for few seconds. He turns to Dhanam to ask her to help him when dhanam says

D: Correct ah sonna Meena! Adha kondu poi un room la irukara andha locker la vachidu. Ivan adha todatum, appuram iruku ..

K: Annanum , anniyum epo pesi.. anni epo vandhu! Aiyo.. en phone..uu…

D: Adhuvum correct than.. Naan maama kita solli maama va pesa sollava rendu per kitayum.

M: Marupadiyum mudhal la irundhu aarambikadheenga…

D: Apparam eppadi meena?

K: Hmmm.. kelunga.. kelunga…

M: Adhuku en kita oru idea iruku! Solren.. Kelunga..

All three are excited and sits a little straighter to listen to Meena

M: Nalaiku oru special day…

Meena informs the family of the significance and they make a plan…

Once they have made a fool proof plan, Meena makes a call to Jeeva’s number to pass the idea of helping K&M if need be.

Jeeva receives the call as they were all speaking, confirms the information with Murugan appa.

After few more calls and conversations between the family members, it was decided that no one was gonna interfere unless need be. They all vowed to make sure K & M spend atleast a little quality time together on this special day.

As Murugan prepared to leave Jeeva called out…
Maama! Raathiri… poonai edhavudu pathiram/ thatu mutu sammanam oorutum… Bayapadadheega! Athai kita yum sollidunga!;)

All the five members in the shop laughed at this, understanding Jeeva’s words.

Murugan left the shop a happy man. He is gonna make sure that his daughter spent her first birthday  after marriage with her better half and returned to her in laws place.

Moorthy anna and Kumaresan maama also smiled broadly on hearing all this.

Saravana: Jeeva nae… ippo theriyudhu! Neenga evlo kedi velailam parthu anniyae love panni irupeenga nu!

Jeeva: dei…

Everyone laughs out loud. 

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